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Jan 22, 2010 15:29:42 GMT -5
Post by Tallaith on Jan 22, 2010 15:29:42 GMT -5
I dunno yet what part I want. I'll wait til I see what everyone else takes. AWESOME work, Dev, and thanks for this! I'm glad to see you so passionate about this story!
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Jan 22, 2010 16:14:29 GMT -5
Post by amariedan on Jan 22, 2010 16:14:29 GMT -5
J. Clorista reaches Bree. Since Mac is still recovering and Kess is far away, there is some time to build some story here. All for sure I want to do is have Brendur, who already knows Clorista from a former job gone wrong, confront her. Also Deveon will have to have some face time with Clorista seeing as how Clor is her step mom who took all the family fortune and most likely killed her father. However this gets worked out there is a direction I need to go to. Clorista doesn't have Kessler there to back her up as a good person since he is not yet in bree so when Cay meets her it is much more as an old acquaintance of Bren. That is until Dev comes in to the picture. Deveon will most likely go ape shit on Bren (which she seems to do a lot ^^) for sleeping with Clor and she will also prolly flip on Clor and head east to seek counsel from her dear friend Cancalan. I figure this would be the spot for RP to start - Or not since I won't prolly be online well, based on what we had started talkin about tween clorista and bridgur, it's at the beginning of this point, when she reaches Bree that bridgur would show up as he would know ahead of time of her arrival thanks to the event with the Blackwolds just before.... er, for no reason in particular, of course >> << lol so ya Bridgur would show up here offering her assistance in any way he could and siding with her as her 'employer'... at least on the surface/at first. anyhoo, ttyl! EDIT TO ADD: although all things considered, as much as i am glad that you want to keep this story going, and by having others take parts of it as well... i don't feel my style of writing combined with lack of knowledge of the characters as intimately as your own, would help do the story true justice to your vision... at least, not without me consistently pestering you over every little detail of it and submitting version after version of it to you for approvals before postings therefore, i must decline accepting takin part in the story in such a fashion... esp also since i just wont have much time for even my own stories for some time due to baby and work and still handling my mother's estate, etc, etc, etc, etc.... you get the idea :/ sorries!
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